This project will be seeking a 2 star rating.
The project is a business proposal for the entertainment website It Only Takes One (IOTO). It contains all the information needed for any potential investors or partners.
Link to Deliverable: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_ETUMelG4m3MWtDc2hjdkJoTHM/edit?usp=sharing
My instructor’s feedback touched on a few formatting problems and wording issues. I had some unnecessary words in my first section that needed to be removed. I also missed capitalizing the “S” in “States” in a later section. Finally, I was advised to change the formatting on my risk assessment section in order to have a uniformed font and margins, increasing professionalism. I made these changes and appreciate the feedback.
The Hardware/Software needed to complete this project included: Macbook, Microsoft Office, Adobe Reader, Google Docs, and Photoshop.